The MC is a bit weird, he would purposely hold back his power and force himself to wield a weapon that he is uncomfortable with. That's actually fine but his goals are to MAKE A COUNTRY while staying super under rader w/e. Something like making a country is without a doubt not low key and not stay out of the "spotlight". There's also him getting angry at people if they come to the misconception that his power level is low, if it pisses him off so much why pretend to be weak in the first place, he doesn't try to change their views so he gets angry at people for not knowing?
There is also the aimlessness of the story, he collects girls and walks around with some sense of purpose of maintaining his peace which is just maintaining a constant balance between the factions of human/demon. Bit different from how he needs to kill the true demon lord to redo his shit and be a man again which is one of this goals. He complains about his situation while he has all the tools to fix it but does nothing. Like the title says the story is like top off head improv than journey with an actual goal other than walking around town with a bunch of girls.

The protagonist gets his gender flipped into a woman and forced back to the beginning of his journey. The king is an ass and won't sponsor women despite the protagonist being a virtual goddess in power now. The protagonist now needs to find something to do with all the vast riches and power brought over from previous lives in order to alleviate her boredom and frustration.

Like almost all gender benders, the female form is played for laughs though in a slightly different fashion than most. The character can be something of a ditz, forgetting what is normal for most people and casually curb stomping things while thinking about what's for lunch.

Because I saw this on the site 'oniichanyamate', I assumed that this would be a good read.
The translator dropped it after 4 chapters. The reason why became readily apparent.

It quickly becomes rather dull and generic (an overused, but fitting, buzzword) as is the norm for 90% of reincarnation web novels. You've got an OP cheat-ability MC who, for whatever reason, does not want to stand out. You've got mediocre ecchi jokes, and fleshed out characters... are but a dream. You've got craploads of (MC THOUGHTS), [TL NOTES],「DIALOGUE」,『SKILL』, and 《ITEM》brackets, which is a pet peeve of mine when overdone. Please, use quote marks for dialogue!
Although the translations are good for the most part, there is often untranslated japanese mixed in, plus lots of TL notes which break the flow. The chapters ends up feeling longwinded, not to mention they have a high quantity of barely relevant explanations.

I liked the fact that we got a curveball when the MC was reincarnated as a girl. I liked the comedy at the start. That raised my expectations. It is likely that if I had not had good expectations of this web novel, I would not have been as disappointed.

I dropped this after 13 chapters; perhaps it improves afterwards, or perhaps not.

... Last updated on May 18th, 2016, 2:32pm

The description is too descriptive-- hah... After you read the description you don't even need to read chapter one. The story seems to have potential and at first you may think it is like new saga, while it may have similarities I have to say that I feel they will be totally different. This one he... she? seem's to be overpowered as fuck, while in New Saga he is strong but I don't believe he's OP, rather he is growing OP.

P.S. It's a comment, not a review...

This isn't like tsuyokute new saga, sure it has reincarnation for another time (third) but this is interesting in its own way. Why?
1. Reincarnated as a girl in the third time
2. Got past the way tsuyokute new saga story wherein the mc in tsuyokute is redoing again the story while this story the mc pursue another route.
3. It's funny
4. It's Ecchi
5. The mc is not making a harem! Like those in the mainstream ones... ( I haven't read wn that much but based on manga of reincarnating, summoning etc. they strive for a harem)
... This is based on my point of view thus reading chapter 11 ... I don't intent to cause an uproar but I just want to clear its connection with tsuyokute new saga.


To Skreamez:
Then what do you suggest as a good novel so I can read it and have more things to compare with this... And all that I've understand (what I wanted to understand) was that you don't like the series and you're suggesting that it is boring, I guess... Anyways I do believe in what you're saying that there are millions of stories and that the minute really matters or whatever that was, so give me a good web novel or light novel (Japanese ONLY!) that'll knock my sock off.

... Last updated on June 28th, 2015, 1:47am

There's only 3 chapters translated by oniichanyamete, but the premise is original and in those three chapters nothing actually happens yet. Still there are two votes rating this as 1+. I'm honestly baffled by that.

In regards to the other review firstly, the only thing you have going for it is the premise, which is based on going back after touching the demon king's gem...hmmm that's not exactly original. It sounds exacty like Tsuyokute New Saga to me. In the first 3 chapters nothing happens...well in my opinion that's not a very good sign. Those first few chapters are what is supposed to hook people in and get them excited for more. This not only failed to do this for me as Tsuyokute has done, but all over the other elements are fairly sub par as well. I'm starting to get really tired of all these "new" novels that are honestly just lazy at this point.

Edit to clarify: I understand this is it's own title. The point is that the premise, which is the only outstanding factor in some people's view, has been done before. Redoing the past and pursuing a new route are the same thing in essence to a different extent. This WN takes it further treating it more like a game and that's different, but it's not new. Game world/reality is not new, reincarnation is not new, gender bender is not new, putting them altogether might not have been done before, but is that all there is to it? It's funny, it's ecchi, it's everything in one, it's new, it's good. Unfortunately, I don't think it works that simply. When I see the regurgitated novels one after another like this, all I can think is it's the next pop song on the radio, the next new reality tv show, same thing different day. It's tosh.0 taking all the next big viral things from other places and mashing them into a smaller sample and saying here you go. If it's funny enough and all the elements are generic enough to draw people in, then that's enough in itself. There's no depth, there's nothing expanding on the ideas already there, there's no substance. In a world with millions of stories, the minute details are what makes things great and unfortunately it's lacking. Objectively in comparison to the many other novels out there already, it's something I can't rate more than below average.

I will send you a message because a list of other titles is not something related to this page.

... Last updated on July 1st, 2015, 10:32am