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Good to read but just too draggy long
This novel is great in itself since it has a completely cultivation system compare to other novels. The story has many mysterious unanswered question mentioned by @windoze but will unfold its mystery on end part, so the plot hole was to make you read till the end. Of course some plot is not answered at all. Lastly to me it's just dragging the story too long and it become a little boring at the end.
PS: read all raw chapters
Exciting but however plot holes everywhere.
Exciting fighting and all that you would expect from the genre. Good work.
However the biggest failure is that lots of questions are forgotten and plot lines are never brought up again.
For example: what's the prize for ten achievements? What is the mysterious bird (not the red one)? What is the dragon pulled sarcophagus? What happened to the two-body girl? What's the tree doing? What is his school doing? Where did his sword come from? Where did the green bell come from? Where did the double eyed girl go? What happened to the little tiger?
Basically if you have a question.... don't expect there to be an answer for it.
Slow and steady with Dennis the Menace
A large portion of the chapters is dedicated to the MC's childhood. I'm only around 100ish and he's still not past 10 yet. Surprisingly, I have had a lot of good laughs with his antics. His alias is also worth a chuckle. The pace is slow but more detailed compared to other xianxias where the MC takes a few chapters to complete a major event.
... Last updated on November 28th, 2016, 3:42pm
funny with good character development, but is a Xianxia novel
It has the usual things of this genre: under estimated male lead that shocks everyone with his awesomeness over and over. This is a staple. So if it annoys you, you'd probably not like it.
Things that set it apart are: this is a slow progression story. The mc doesn't get overpowered in a few chapters by training hard. unlike most other stories the main character isn't even the strongest in the current generation, and the adults can indisputably beat him without limits on their power.
The characters are very rich and have personally. Usually when someone looks down on a MC in this genre, they are defeated and forgotten in 2 or 3 chapters. In this story, those that are defeated and don't die, often end up being friends with the mc. They all have separate personalities and backgrounds and do not just stand at the side going "look how awesome my big bro is!" Often the side characters go off doing what they want or what makes sense for their character. Their lives don't revolve around the MC like other stories and they don't always go along with whatever he wants to do.
The character maturity level is very accurate. I like that the main character behaves like his age would dictate. When he's 2 or 3 he's adorable and cute. At the current time (around ch 150), when he's 7 or 8 he is a complete hellion that everyone on the continent wants to spank. He reacts to being OP as a 7 or 8 year old would. he also thinks pretty girls are ugly xD. If we continue to get snapshots like this, I can see these being great stories about his childhood in chapter 1000+
TL;DR: it has all the shitty Xianxia writing techniques with no interesting characters or hooks at the start.
This story is slightly unusual since this story focuses on a tribe more so than a specific character (although you do get your tribe star that gets most of the focus), at least at the start. It could work... if the author actually spent more time making the reader actually like the full cast in the tribe, or at least anyone in it really. I don't care how these chemical baths will help grow the kids up strong or how these special beasts will bring a full abundance of food to the families. Everything is so mechanic.
I'm sure 'it gets better' but knowing how awful this author is on writing emotion and character dialog, I'm going to pass on the initial grind.
good unique world
alright my opinion about this novel :
this novel have good fantasy world and very unique settings (for my perspective), the concept of cultivitation its unique too, not only that this novel have good combat ( the author make a good job for explaining the visualization of the combat and skill)
i guess i will give this novel rating around 7/10 or 8/10 (since i like good combat)
this novel have a drawback too, the problem was the drama (story) not deep enough since its more focused on the combat, and if possible the author should make a better personalisation on all character. Since some character personality it seems too excessive and lacking relation with other character. ( because of that, this novel romance is average and making the friendship seems lacking too)
it can be up to 9/10 rating if author make friendship more active and not passive ( active i mean the friendship is almost like real which can help main character or something to achieve goal and still exist on the story until last chapter. Since from what i read at this novel, the main character almost solo everything and almost all of his active friend already left behind since too weak )
this novel it seems have a plot hole for the story and not only 1 plot hole, for example :
i forgot at what chapter but at the mortal world where the main character kill 7 god (if not wrong its 7) and the main character died (after that resurection), there are a "place" where it seems author forgot to connecting the story for it where the main character used "that place" to kill a few from the 7 god or true god (i forgot the cultivitation rank of the opponent)
btw, for the extra information i already read the novel until chapter 1600+
conclusion : the story in this novel its simple but not bad, and the combat? its good because the author make a good job for a very detailed battle scenery ( extra conclusion : the world setting its really good for a fantasy world which matched with the story, character and combat)
... Last updated on April 16th, 2016, 1:40am
Read up to ch 129
After 80~ horrible boring chapters the series starts to be slightly funny. That the writer decided that the MC should be between 3-6 years old for the start is just silly. He could instead placed the kid into the age bracket 10-13 without a problem.
The translation quality is just bearable. Sometimes one has to reread the sentence to understand if the character is serious or joking.
As for the story, its a weird cultivation story with a revenge theme.
... Last updated on March 7th, 2016, 3:02pm
It is a very good Novel, a different type of novel, it is not like Coiling Dragon or Desolate Era, it is more eastern like. It is very good translated, and i am very grateful to the guys who are working on it, but still it's going very slow, and i think it's going to take a very long time finish it, and the raws are still ongoing ...
Well written! Good translation! One of my first Xianxia novels is MGA and that is trash! It made me quit reading Xianxia. Everything about it is atrocious! The author should slap himself. But then I found this. This is what a Xianxia should be! The build up is awesome!
Who hit you in the head?
One of the best novel I've read
This is an amazing novel, with just a few chapters Iím hooked! Itís similar to Desolate Era but I like the MC on this novel more. The later chapters are quite amusing and I LOVE the MC. The translated chapter so far (chapter 50) are just an introduction of their world, the real awesome scene are just ahead. This also reminds me of MGA since the MC is always looking for treasures that can help him and his family level up.
I also like the setting since unlike most xianxia novels which made the humans more the dominant race, this novel has monster that are more powerful that the most powerful humans.