Many of you may think that there is no way in hell naive girls like these are in reality but they do and not only girls but boys too, it's not easy to find them but they indeed are real. So how's the story? It is brilliant. The male mc is b#st#rd and f##ka around with every girl because he is handsome. The female mc is suffering from trauma because of past love live and thus is unable to get a clean breakup from this @sshole bf. There are few negative things that I observed in the story especially with the female characters. I don't know what the heck was authoring thinking about when he/she made such bad decisions.

[¡] 1. The main female character choose to ignore her bf's personal life even though she knew that something is off. Not only that she choose to ignore it but also always tries to find ways to make things ok between the two even when her bf was caught red handed when they both were in a car and his 2nd gf called.

2. The redhead female character did fine most of the time and probably the most powerful (will) female among the group. She caught her glasses friend's boyfriend cheating on her but choose to keep silent because what? She thought this is not her business and she shouldn't meddle in their private matters (note: the group consists of 4 girls and they are friends from childhood and are very close even now). She later started dating a younger man which was actually cool and all but then her ex boyfriend appeared. Her ex boyfriend tried to persuade her in a relationship and she dumps him down directly. It was actually super nice to see such rejection in stories with romance genre. People normally would drag things around for a while and then get misunderstood and all. So why I'm writing all these? The story later developed and was shown that her ex boyfriend is now a good person (wow man!) and is now regretting because of the past. He later died in an accident. The redhead found about it and gone to his funeral. It was shown that she is crying and regretting that she rejected his proposal (omg come on dude, wtf? We're talking about the same same ex who told her to keep their relationship secret and dumped her to marry a rich woman and later even divorced her). She even said that she is regretting that she is now in a relationship with a younger man who by the way is probably the most honest man you'll find in the story and really cares about their relationship.

3. The glasses girl. She probably is the most weakest, naive and probably in the most f##ked up relationship. Her current boyfriend is cheating on her with another women from past one year and even after she found about out, she choose to stay blindsided and when he finally dumped her @ss in the story, she actually tried to get together with him. The @ss boyfriend eventually came back and she forgive him by saying alot of bullshit excuses and i know for a fact that she will again be betrayed by this scumbag if the story had continued.
4. What makes all these points more irritating is because the author is somewhat trying to justify all these actions in one way or another. Just see this example for a moment and think yourself what kind of f#cked logic is this supposed to be?
Ex- the female mc finally understood what she was doing is nothing but dragging her own life into misery so she finally snapped and dumped him. The male mc was stingy and tried to get back with her later. She again dumped him and this time she choose some really awesome harsh words to end it completely. Wow amazing right? Now read this - she at the end of the story was shown to be crying because she said such harsh words to him (what?) and later she even apologized for it to the sc#mbag (omg are you kidding me b##ch?). The story ended with her being in a healthy relationship with another guy (finally!) and you know what she said before the story concluded? 'I don't regret that I fall in love with the male mc' (yes, you f##king deserved it. People like you are the reason more women gets cheated and played by the sc#mbags).


I'm sorry for my bad english. The story was pretty much good but I don't think we should make such words sound OK because it is not. I understand that the story tried to be as real as possible but the points earlier i said are no way in hell is right. Atleast make it sound bad if you can't change it.

... Last updated on January 13th, 2020, 6:01pm