Unsure if it was a name change or what, but official sources for this comic list the author (作者) as Shidai Man Wang (时代漫王). The art style is recognisably his too, especially for the later chapters.

Unsure where Fan Cheng and Ge Ling came from, but perhaps there was a mix-up with a comic of a similar name, but the comic translated by HuzbiScanlations is definitely the one listed under 时代漫王.

See: https://www.cocomanga.com/search?searchString=%E6%97%B6%E4%BB%A3%E6%BC%AB%E7% 8E%8B
https://ac.qq.com/Comic/ComicInfo/id/542330?trace_id=908_66.249.65.28_1466343 850

Typical "shounen battle manga" but not without its own unique twist.

The major difference being the main character's setting, where the manhua artist himself who was thrown into the story which makes room for a lot of "plot armour" and "cheats" that makes sense.
Seen before but the concept of narrating a new storyline progression on top of an "original plot" of the manhua further contributes to the stylistic elements of the presentation.

However, in the end, the majority of the storyline progress without much ingenuity on the main character's part or creativity in his use of "foresight", falling into a mundane repetition of fighting and leveling up as you would expect from generic "shounen battle mangas" as well as absolutely snail-paced romantic subplot progression that boasts no depth.

The story is creative, although it is not the first time somebody writes something with a "Mangaka into his own manga plot", and the characters are likeable, specially the MC, but the translation is just terrible.

I mean, we are talking "Me thinks this right" level of terrible. So much that you would find yourself wondering if it is machine translated or just made by someone who is messing around.
I am by far not an expert of the English Language but this is ridiculous.

I know it might sound rude, especially since being a translator is a by the people for the people kind of thing, and I am thankful somebody tried his hand at this, but I assure you that it is near un-readable at times, and it is likely we miss much of the plot because of it.

I hope a real groups picks it up or that Line, or whichever company, officially translates it. Then It could get popular.


Either that, or I and whoever might want to read it should consider leaning Korean.

... Last updated on August 15th, 2018, 7:23pm