Not much happens and the characters are flat. Even the small amount of relationship tension they try to create is boring, and not really resolved. At least it's a coherent plot from beginning to end, even if it's boring.

The premise takes about 3 chapters, chapter 4 introduces TWO conflicts of interest that get swept under the rug immediately or are forgiven on the spot. The two main characters are very archetypal, which wouldn't be a bad thing if the story took a new angle, but it all essentially boils down to the typical age gap pairing. The younger one fawns after the older one and the older one out of obligation allows the younger one to continue fucking up because it brings change to their repetitive life. The story could be improved with a second series or continuation, but I think the writer needs to learn how to progress a relationship faster if the five chapter limit was predetermined before a continuation should be approved. Art is tasteful though.

... Last updated on September 1st, 2022, 12:39pm