deserves higher, this work has an unusual twist =D
prob got lesser cos it doesnt have those hot sex scenes most ppl seem fond of -_- but storywise is gd as a standalone

I found this story enjoyable and interesting BUT it would have benifited from more leg space. If it had had more room to spread out it would have been much better. As it is, the characters are a little bit superficial feeling, and the catch of the story isnt explained in detail. Overall it ends up a little rushed D: and its a pity, because it was a good story in and of itself. I really love Miyamoto Kano's works, but many of her one shots suffer this from this problem.

It's a nice job, coming up with all the good points you can expect by the author. The setting is interesting, the characters distinctive, the twists well placed and the drawing style gets on your good side, too. But - Unfortunately the limited range of a oneshot cutted down the emotional development of the characters, so their feelings came somewhat out of the blue and couldn't have been made clear for each. It's regrettable, since I would have liked to see more of the difficulties, which will be coming up from the solution. However, it's a work worth the read.

I didn't quite like this. There's no depth to their feelings. Or maybe there is, but I'm just not feeling it. I felt like the supernatural aspect was just thrown in to tie things up(which it did, but not in as classy a way as I'd hoped).

After reading Miyamoto-sensei's oneshot Elemental, I had hopes for her works and read this, but this pales in comparison. Hopefully reading some more of her other works can change my opinion.