Compared to Kawaii Oresama, this was way more cliche and badly written. It follows the same cliched shoujo formula most shoujos follow. I liked the couple and the guy in Kawaii Oresama more. The art's good at the very least.

The art is great; very clean-cut with cute-looking characters, albeit with no particular style that sets it apart from much of the shoujo out there.

The storyline and characters are very much the same; following the generic shoujo formula, but with the added weakness of being limited by its length, so the scenes have a cut-and-paste feel. Instead of depicting the development of Tsukina and Youko's relationship, it jumps from one place to another. Extremely confusing, and makes it impossible for us to know anything about the two beyond 2D character sketches.

Could be considered "cute" by some, though, if all you're looking for are attractively-drawn characters and an "aww" moment at the end.

... Last updated on December 16th, 2008, 5:09am

I liked it =)
Yeah it was short but it was a good one, the only thing missing was a kiss, and maybe a little bit longer,
Im a girl who likes simple storys and this one is one of the ones i like. I dont like the who love triangles thats already to cliche i like something nice and simple. This was a kind of good story ^^