Yes, I agree. Although the "Smut" tag didn't get my hopes up from the beginning, the dialogues and storyline have been just too tacky. Without the smut scene randomly thrown in, there might have been hope or with not that off-paced developments, but like this it's nothing you need to have in your lists. Sighs.

... Last updated on September 30th, 2013, 12:48pm

I agree with everyone very boring not worth reading maybe because it was a one-shot that there was not enough plot and stuff, the only good thing was the snow association as disremembrance mentioned.

Horrible. REALLY not worth reading D: The pacing's nonexistant, the characters are flatter than flat, and it was just plain wasted time. Dx At least it was short.

I agree, this never really got anywhere, except for the beautiful snow associations. The rest was boring shit. It does not deserve to be on my complete list. Therefore it is not.

... Last updated on November 29th, 2008, 3:43am

Awayki no Namida was somewhat cute. It's a one-shot, so the plot is rushed and unrealistic at best. There are some interesting snow analogies to love, but that's the only saving grace of this series. Do the characters have personalities? I'm still not sure.