I just thought that was pretty cool since that's not a thing that's commonly mentioned in yaoi (probs cause not many people have moles on their dicks). But I kind of wish that there was more so that we can see it both ways (the joys of switching).

Yes, it was funny how things started out and then came along the point, where both characters got into a battle about being the top. BUT - For me the dialogues and also the physical scenes haven't been my cup of tea, because they seemed to repetetive and taking up to much space, which could have been used for some better conclusion. Then again, that's a well known weakness of the Yaoi genre as a whole, so maybe others might like this oneshot better.

HAVE THEY NOT HEARD OF HAVING SEX WITHOUT INSERTING ONE IN ANOTHER?!!!

That would be called frotting! and neither parties need to degrade themselves to be the bottom! happy sex without anal penetration=less pain and no need for preparation except for arousal.

But as always, yaoi would have the traditional vanilla sex. Oh well, guess it's right up their kink radar, so it's aight.

This is the part that slightly ticked me off. Otherwise, I enjoyed it, light read filled with a nice sex scene. Frotting in the world of yaoi is rare, but it's as hot as the traditional pxa action.

This one is a short and cute read but nothing spectacular. The art is just a tad below average and the plot could use a bit more "oomph".
But as smutty yaoi oneshots go, it's a good one. I found the plot tried to be more unique, and any variation of the typical cliche oneshot plot is appreciated.

I was disappointed. I wanted the other guy to be the seme. I didn't find it romantic the way things turned out which is a shame.
Stepping back from my disappointment though the art was nice and it was kinda funny so knock yourselves out.

I usually don't read one shots, i prefer more prolonged stories, bur the description for the story sucked me in. Is there anything more enticing than two tachi's each trying to seduce the other into being the neko *laugh* great fun, quite cute and with good art. No complaints here except for the length

i was randomly search oneshot just for killing time. then i read this. this is unexpectedly good, n quite funny.. lol..
the smex is sooooo hot!! <3 *droools..*
the art were quite good too, even though we could see which one is going to be the top n bottom, but its still good..
it really is nice for killing time, lol..