favourite, probably my first mpreg, very very poor translation

I'm not exactly sure how to articulate my dislike for this one. I thnk a lot of t, unfortunately, came from the scanlators (bless them and thank them for their efforts) choice of display, I don't know why they made the choice of using that font and the grammar was often times hard to read. The manga though s very rushed, the story line doesn't give you any time to breathe, literally none. The last story as well just did not sit with me and the overall piece just doesn't really have any grounding. I'd feel a bit better if it said there was related manga but no, none, this is all by itself, there's not even a prequel or sequel to explain what just happened.

So... I liked the manga... until the bonus chapters. I felt the first bonus chapter forced a "romance" *eyeroll* where there didn't need to be one, and it wasn't even a romance in my eyes. And that last chapter...
I wanted to cry. Just... no.
That last chapter made this manga drop from a 7/8 to a 3. It was that bad to me. It wasn't exactly shotacon but it was close enough that I wish I could burn it from my mind.

I don't want to be ungrateful, but I really wish the scanlations were better for this manga, because on its own it's already confusing enough, now doubled with the messy scanlations I had a really hard time trying to comprehend while reading this. Anyway, I like the chibi youkais enough, I mean they're freaking adorable, but other than that I can't say much more about the whole book I've just read. The story is somewhat plain, the main characters somehow aren't very much to my liking, the development is obscurely sudden, and those wtf moments are really too much for me. Can't say I gained a lot after reading this, although I really wanted to like it.

The chibi is so adorable! The story is not bad, although some part of the story seems a little bit too sudden and fast but I do understand what was going on. The characters are lovable and the art is not too bad. You can't actually expect much from stories like this, since it's a light read after all and the plot isn't too deep and there's no drama either. Probably something you'd enjoy when you've got nothing else to read or do, and want something light to fulfil your affection needs x3

I really enjoyed this manga! It's different from any other manga I've read and I loved the plotline (bit of mpreg too tehe not every day you get that)
I couldn't work out whether it was the translation or whether the mangaka just wrote in a disjointed way but I found it hard to follow sometimes.
I loved the pairings, but I would have liked another chapter or two exploring the relationship between the yokai dad and Oike.
The chapter at the end with the kids and the dog I could have done without.
I'd really like to see the mangaka do more stories along the same lines as this one ^^ and even better - a sequel or something.

This manga is pretty much fluffy and it has some wtf factors in it...but it's highly amusing with all the cute things that pop in every panel.

Well, I won't elaborate too much on what the wtf factors are, but it's kind of amusing reading through the whole volume.

It just gets on with the kinks, but not too knee-deep. Hehehe...

... Last updated on June 23rd, 2013, 7:46am