and the onther one shot Iron cock, i liked it too. But the art is better in this one. It is a bit silly at one point but it was nothing, is not a bad one shot, i've read bad things and this is not one of them, but is nothing special, just perverted in a non graphic way. What i wanted to see
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is the uke being the seme and the seme being the uke, and based on what the master said, they normally are in different positions than the one showed here.
The art is simply gorgeous, but the story is one of the most retarded things I've ever seen. I can't believe the authors from Feng Yu Jiu Tian could come up with something so stupid. 4 - I can't give less because of the art