This looks good, because I'm a sap. I love these romantic sorts, and the first thing I notice is that there's nothing that binds emotions, so it's sort of crude. I wish it updated more, because it appears to be the type of story in which, the character's development sort of guides it... That's sort of rare, and especially in the way everyone starts off mad, and then gentler emotions might be on the horizon. Haha All in all, it's a good start.
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