Story wise not too bad

it's true that the endings are a little on the abrupt side. it seems like the romantic tension is cut early so that we can imagine the beginnings of relationships instead of seeing them blossom naturally. Some stories really only needed a page more! it isn't terrible, however. Just slightly unsatisfactory for those who like to have some hope for the romance, lol.

I wonder if the scanlation team lacked a proofreader for this series. A lot of sentences were really odd and sounded as if they were trying to mean something else, but the order of the words was off.

.. she never knows how to write a conclusion! lol. I could understand how other readers would feel frustrated with her manga; this is the second collection of stories from her that I've read, so that makes it, what, 6(?) little stories without a single proper resolution. Haha. Wow.

Having said that, is it bad that I like all of them even despite their incompleteness? lol. In fact, it is exactly this lingering sensation after every story that makes them resonate in your mind. I don't know how to explain it very well, it's a very peculiar feeling indeed. I think Kashio-sensei has a lot of good ideas and possesses fairly decent writing prowess. Now if only she could clean up her art and learn how to end her stories the right way, she could become much more appreciated like she rightfully should be.

Odu-kun's story seemed kinda unfinished. But the other two stories were enough. Although the last part of the second story was fuzzy about its ending.

The art at times was a bit too messy and at other times cute and unique. Overall, it had the sketchpen-freehand-style (which I like), but the anatomy wasn't consistent throughout the volume.

... Last updated on November 8th, 2015, 2:45pm