The one-shot was a nice read. I think the manganka could've done more with the amount of pages, but it was nice. Especially loved the kiss at the end. Not mature or reall chaste either. Just a little panel, not blown up. It was really sweet. ^_^ Good read.
the story is ok... the art is not that good... the magaka tried really hard to make it somehow realistic but in the end they just ended looking like drunk people (just look at the unfocused eyes!!!) the characters only look good when their eyes are closed!!!