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1-5) Please Wait Tanaka who works as a station attendant has an odd aversion to being touched. When a businessman, Doujima, finds out about his affliction, he teases him about it. Though Tanaka hates the feeling of touching others, he can't help but feel strangely attracted to Doujima...
6) Think Drip Minamoto and Yoshino have been best friends for 10 years... but Yoshino feels slightly inferior, even though it seems like Minamoto is always chasing after him. While they are out drinking with a friend one night, he asks the two friends if they have had sex yet.... and that one question sends Yoshino spiraling.
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liked it, but...
i agree with @deathbypenguin, there is something missing in this manga, it is really nice though.
I have a question, are Doujima from the main story and Minato from the last chapter the same person? @Kir seemed to imply in his comment that they were the same person, but i'm not sure. When i first saw minato i thought they were the same person (because they look the same) and when a finshed reading the last chapter a thought they just looked similar and that it was an unrealted extra story, that the author tried to draw a similar character but wasn't able to and ended with one looking exactly the same. And then there is the issue on the diferent names, though it could be that one was the surname and the other the first name? i'm confused. Anyway, if they were the same person, that really ruined this manga for me, cause he was like cheating or something? o was that the past, and if was what relevance did it have.
After all this rumbling i'm gonna stick with it being an unrelated extra until someone else tells me the truth.
P.S: sorry for all my incoherent babbling. XD
I've read this and at first, I have to say that the drawing is very cute
Second is the plot. So many flaws, love at first sight, no explanation why Doujima likes him and he used the worst method to get Tanaka trapped , how can Tanaka, who has a very bad memory from before, get affected easily so like that ?
The most confusing one is the last chapter. Does Doujima really love him or Tanaka just resembles to Yoshino ? I can believe that 10 years knowing Yoshino, Doujima can break up with him so easily because from Tanaka's view, Doujima is very loyal(?).
Well, I can't say that this manga is great unless I delete Yoshino and Doujima's part.
The art is gorgeous. Really. With that kind of art I don't really care what the plot is like and stuff. Nevertheless, there is plot. It's confusing at times - or perhaps it's the fault of scanlators? - but exceptionally sweet. There is definitely something missing here, as the previous reviewer mentioned, but the story is still good and nice.
@Trifollum: That's why we have an "Advanced Search" option, so you can narrow down your search to include not just "Business Man" but also the genre and whatever other categories you want with it. Every manga with a business man should have this category tag. I don't see why this would be a problem.
As for the story, Trifollum's reaction was similar to mine. I did think their sudden inexplicable love for each other incomprehensible, though. (It was a sort of a "love at first sight" kind of deal, only not exactly.) The reader is expected to infer a lot of information from the story rather than having it told directly which was kind of interesting. (For example the exact cause of Tanaka's aversion to touch.) I recommend it, but still feel as though it's missing something that I can't quite figure out. Realism maybe? More characters? Also, not everyone who is shy or has an aversion to human contact has had something traumatic happen to them. Silly authors.
Basically, it's the most generic plot ever in yaoi; guy meets guy, guy had trauma and resists guy, guy falls in love with guy.
I won't say it's boring, though; it's still sweet, and sinfully tasty, even though you know you've had this like, a thousand times. Like homemade chocolate chip cookies. And besides, I think this is the most explicit (scanlated) Moto Haruko work so far, thus it wins extra smut point.
Recommended for all the long-time reader of yaoi wanting to see a new spin of the old thing.
(Also, the categories; "Business Man", really? How many yaoi are going to be there with that only, not counting shoujo and josei?)