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I'd like to present you soul dreamer manga.

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alexitsios	Post #578835
Member 5:24 pm, Nov 29 2012 Posts: 6	Hi, i'd like to present you my manga, Soul Dreamer. I started a blog called how to draw mangas which is related to "how to draw manga" and i decided to start publishing my manga. Here are the first two chapters: http://howtodrawmangas.com/post/32253256810/soul-dreamer-m anga-1 http://howtodrawmangas.com/post/36802324395/soul-dreamer-m anga-2 I'd like to ask you guys if it's possible to list it here in manga updates, as it's more possible that people will read it there, rather in my blog that it has low visibility. story The background of the story takes place in our world. The protagonists are chosen by a mediator and they obtain the mark of the souldreamer. The mark gives them the ability to travel in a parallel dream world, where they fight nightmares.
alexitsios	Post #584906
Member 10:32 am, Jan 23 2013 Posts: 6	Just published the third issu: http://howtodrawmangas.com/post/41269839531/soul-dreamer-m anga-3 i hope you'll enjoy it
Ncf	Post #584939
Member 7:59 pm, Jan 23 2013 Posts: 12	They are really short XD but so far I really like it xD ________________ [CENTER][/CENTER] [CENTER][/CENTER]
Pikapu	Post #584943
-_-  Member 8:06 pm, Jan 23 2013 Posts: 1885	I question your choice of dialogue font... And try proper spelling and grammar. D: Like... type out your sentences in Microsoft Word first and then transfer those to your pages..... If you want. Just a suggestion from a passerby. Also, from what I can tell, the MU superiors prefer published (print and web (web meaning the chapters are released at a constant rate or something; they are complete chapters)) mangas/comics to keep in the database.... Or something like that. But I could be wrong; if you really want to know a definitive answer, try PMing lambchopsil (that is, unless you have already received word that you can't have your series in the MU database). ________________ Quote from LawX You are like the dense main character in a shoujo manga. Quote from Crenshinibon And you will murder someone one day, pika. If you're my daughter. PLAY WITH ME IN DIABLO 3! *PM me for info*
alexitsios	Post #585338
Member 2:49 pm, Jan 27 2013 Posts: 6	Thanks for your comments guys. I know that the chapters are really short, but manga is my hobby. I work a lot of hours in my primary job, so it's hard to make larger chapters. I try my best though! @Ncf thanks for your comments. I'll try and make them bigger from now on. @Pikapu MU publish scanlations which are translated. Mine isn't so i don't validate. You have absolutely right about the fonts and grammar. I'm not a native speaker, so it's hard for me to write english as it's not my primary language. I'll probably hire a proof reader for the next one.
Vixion	Post #585408
A Proud Otaku! :D Member 1:44 am, Jan 28 2013 Posts: 10	Wow!! The art looks amazing! And the story plot looks interesting :-) I'll look forward to this! Keep up the good work! Ps: I wanna be a mangaka too ^_^ I have been practicing drawing not good as yours though x) ________________
switchgear	Post #585410 - Reply to (#585338) by alexitsios
Member 2:15 am, Jan 28 2013 Posts: 203	It's pretty good, a little choppy and if I may say so without offending you abrupt in its transitions from scene to scene. Besides that though from the little plot seen so far it could be rather interesting. I'll definitely continue reading. On another note, I've always wanted to try my hand at proofreading manga. ________________ Banana Gecko!! [B]
doki-doki-kimochi	Post #585413
EXCALIBURRR!~  Member 2:53 am, Jan 28 2013 Posts: 98	You definitely have potential I haven't actually figured out the plot yet but just by looking at the artwork (yes, I love beautiful artwork~) I'd say that it's very clean, and that the layout is nice. I don't know if this is intentional, though, but on the first chapter/issue/release the character says, "What happened? I think I passed away" I kind of LOL'ed at that...judging on the standard that I think you meant to put "passed out." As someone already mentioned, the dialogue is a little awkward and if you intentionally wrote it like that, I think you should use the word "died" instead..."passed away" is like a formal euphemism-ish. ________________ It's a story of my birth in the morning and death in the evening. Ah...this loneliness of ours is a jewel bearing a color similar to the story.
tgirl	Post #585510
hoo ha Member 10:26 pm, Jan 28 2013 Posts: 182	Keep forgetting to comment on this. OP: You have potential. Some of the scene transitions feel a little jarring to me (like one scene he's "dreaming", but then, he's "awake") but that's as much crit as you'll get from me. I'm surprised that you're doing it this way instead of hosting the manga on something like Drunk Duck or Smack Jeeves. I posted my own online manga over there, however, looking at Batoto, it doesn't seem like a bad place to re-start anything (for me, at least). Good luck!! ________________ Looking for memory related manga/manhwa? -> click me