Debu to Bijin

The male MC is kind of a garbage character. Like the anti-Gary Stu; still cookie cutter and really lacking any detail or personality, but also worthless instead of perfect. Makes self-insertion easy, which is the point of this sort of work, but it annoys me.

Really if this were made into a series, the plot should center around them dealing with their internal complexities colliding.

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That was a nice story.

by SangMo
8 years ago

Rating: 8.0 / 10.0

It really is just that. Beautiful Slut meets Fat Loser...

And they fall for each other. At first, she's a playgirl who's with a lot of guys, and then meets the Fat Loser and bonds with him over video games.

Like I would read a series of this.

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Nice idea

by Trimutius
10 years ago

Rating: 8.7 / 10.0

It is a nice idea, probably not a popular idea, but I've liked the plot. Don't get tricked by the description, it's actually very positive manga and the girl does everything because she wants to even though the guy is sore loser without even money on him.

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Untapped potential

by bakerygirl
11 years ago

Rating: 8.5 / 10.0

This was a good read. Two good for nothing people find solace together. I would have liked it more if it had been longer. Maybe some delving into the characters' past. There has to be an interesting story behind their lives. One part about the manga that I enjoyed was that the beginning is actually how the story ends. For some reason that caught my interest.

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