The oneshot wanted the story to make is seem like the main guy was a douche but that his heart was in the right place. I got that but he still seemed like a douche in the end. I would have dumped the son of a b....

It was okay. Like, the blushing was adorable, but the amount of sex they had annoyed me. For example, she asks him if they can talk alone, and in the next panel, they're on his bed and he's taking off his shirt, completely ignoring how visibly upset she is until she starts crying. His friends are even in the next room. I guess this had potential, but it didn't live up to it all that well.