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Slow and steady with Dennis the Menace
A large portion of the chapters is dedicated to the MC's childhood. I'm only around 100ish and he's still not past 10 yet. Surprisingly, I have had a lot of good laughs with his antics. His alias is also worth a chuckle. The pace is slow but more detailed compared to other xianxias where the MC takes a few chapters to complete a major event.
... Last updated on November 28th, 2016, 3:42pm
funny with good character development, but is a Xianxia novel
It has the usual things of this genre: under estimated male lead that shocks everyone with his awesomeness over and over. This is a staple. So if it annoys you, you'd probably not like it.
Things that set it apart are: this is a slow progression story. The mc doesn't get overpowered in a few chapters by training hard. unlike most other stories the main character isn't even the strongest in the current generation, and the adults can indisputably beat him without limits on their power.
The characters are very rich and have personally. Usually when someone looks down on a MC in this genre, they are defeated and forgotten in 2 or 3 chapters. In this story, those that are defeated and don't die, often end up being friends with the mc. They all have separate personalities and backgrounds and do not just stand at the side going "look how awesome my big bro is!" Often the side characters go off doing what they want or what makes sense for their character. Their lives don't revolve around the MC like other stories and they don't always go along with whatever he wants to do.
The character maturity level is very accurate. I like that the main character behaves like his age would dictate. When he's 2 or 3 he's adorable and cute. At the current time (around ch 150), when he's 7 or 8 he is a complete hellion that everyone on the continent wants to spank. He reacts to being OP as a 7 or 8 year old would. he also thinks pretty girls are ugly xD. If we continue to get snapshots like this, I can see these being great stories about his childhood in chapter 1000+
TL;DR: it has all the shitty Xianxia writing techniques with no interesting characters or hooks at the start.
This story is slightly unusual since this story focuses on a tribe more so than a specific character (although you do get your tribe star that gets most of the focus), at least at the start. It could work... if the author actually spent more time making the reader actually like the full cast in the tribe, or at least anyone in it really. I don't care how these chemical baths will help grow the kids up strong or how these special beasts will bring a full abundance of food to the families. Everything is so mechanic.
I'm sure 'it gets better' but knowing how awful this author is on writing emotion and character dialog, I'm going to pass on the initial grind.
good unique world
alright my opinion about this novel :
this novel have good fantasy world and very unique settings (for my perspective), the concept of cultivitation its unique too, not only that this novel have good combat ( the author make a good job for explaining the visualization of the combat and skill)
i guess i will give this novel rating around 7/10 or 8/10 (since i like good combat)
this novel have a drawback too, the problem was the drama (story) not deep enough since its more focused on the combat, and if possible the author should make a better personalisation on all character. Since some character personality it seems too excessive and lacking relation with other character. ( because of that, this novel romance is average and making the friendship seems lacking too)
it can be up to 9/10 rating if author make friendship more active and not passive ( active i mean the friendship is almost like real which can help main character or something to achieve goal and still exist on the story until last chapter. Since from what i read at this novel, the main character almost solo everything and almost all of his active friend already left behind since too weak )
this novel it seems have a plot hole for the story and not only 1 plot hole, for example :
i forgot at what chapter but at the mortal world where the main character kill 7 god (if not wrong its 7) and the main character died (after that resurection), there are a "place" where it seems author forgot to connecting the story for it where the main character used "that place" to kill a few from the 7 god or true god (i forgot the cultivitation rank of the opponent)
btw, for the extra information i already read the novel until chapter 1600+
conclusion : the story in this novel its simple but not bad, and the combat? its good because the author make a good job for a very detailed battle scenery ( extra conclusion : the world setting its really good for a fantasy world which matched with the story, character and combat)
... Last updated on April 16th, 2016, 1:40am
Read up to ch 129
After 80~ horrible boring chapters the series starts to be slightly funny. That the writer decided that the MC should be between 3-6 years old for the start is just silly. He could instead placed the kid into the age bracket 10-13 without a problem.
The translation quality is just bearable. Sometimes one has to reread the sentence to understand if the character is serious or joking.
As for the story, its a weird cultivation story with a revenge theme.
... Last updated on March 7th, 2016, 3:02pm
It is a very good Novel, a different type of novel, it is not like Coiling Dragon or Desolate Era, it is more eastern like. It is very good translated, and i am very grateful to the guys who are working on it, but still it's going very slow, and i think it's going to take a very long time finish it, and the raws are still ongoing ...
Well written! Good translation! One of my first Xianxia novels is MGA and that is trash! It made me quit reading Xianxia. Everything about it is atrocious! The author should slap himself. But then I found this. This is what a Xianxia should be! The build up is awesome!
Who hit you in the head?
One of the best novel I've read
This is an amazing novel, with just a few chapters Iím hooked! Itís similar to Desolate Era but I like the MC on this novel more. The later chapters are quite amusing and I LOVE the MC. The translated chapter so far (chapter 50) are just an introduction of their world, the real awesome scene are just ahead. This also reminds me of MGA since the MC is always looking for treasures that can help him and his family level up.
I also like the setting since unlike most xianxia novels which made the humans more the dominant race, this novel has monster that are more powerful that the most powerful humans.
... Last updated on December 4th, 2015, 6:11am
So far...so ok. :)
Well you can say all that if you are looking at it from a modern societal standpoint. Also it isn't child abuse if the children are not psychologically damaged negatively. Clearly, what they are doing is traditional and nobody has said it is bad. What they are doing is painful for the children but based on the story, it better that, than be eaten by beasts. Chief is doting, not experimenting. The things he teaches and gives the MC is harder than most and the only thing he tested on the child was bone language thingy, which I don't get the impression is particularly violent. Unless he hates studying. Also if you call this abuse then, ST and other xianxia which involve near murderously difficult training and preparation to fight against people and/or monsters that aren't going to care what you're childhood was like, needs to be included. I also see nothing wrong with a setting beginning in a rural area. Most MCs are nobles or children of powerful/semi-powerful clans, and a change isn't hurting any one. I find it interesting. To be honest I don't understand what you dislike about an environment of a story beginning in the middle of nowhere and by "savage" you mean clearly intelligent men and women who live less than wealthy lives and can brave being in an environment that takes lives without warning, then almost every Xianxia character is a savage. Oh...and we are just at under 10 chapters... Kinda hard to give a sound opinion on anything at this point...
... Last updated on September 2nd, 2015, 11:48am
Savage life and Child abuse lol
So far chapter 6
I really don't understand the story so far all I can see is a savage way of living people live in house of stones the man hunts and bring food and they live in the middle of nowhere They are like cave man version
Child abuse? I don't know if this little child is the mc (1 and half years old) but this child is being experimented by the chief of the village Being boiled in a pot fill with various of monsters blood other children age 4-10 won't even last since they can fill extreme pain like there skin is being torn to pieces Imagine the MC (1.5 years old) is being put there 3 times than normal and the child is also feed with various ingredients there was once after he ate something the child went berserk and was jumping from one roof to another All the children in the village cant help but feel pity towards him I don't know why but I really feel its child abuse lol
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