It's a short doujinshi so I could understand it fine, but there were a lot of cluttered and visually messy panels that made it needlessly hard to understand what I'm specifically looking at. The story itself is pretty cute but the doujinka could really improve on structuring her manga compositions as well as her art in general in order to better present her ideas. Also maybe I missed something, but what does the title have anything to do with the actual content of the doujinshi? Like where's the correlation lol, I don't get it.