As the title says, it's good, but the author has consistently demonstrated their inability to write logic and structure in a consistent manner whenever not developing the plot. It's to the point half a chapter can be wasted on unnecessary side-content and doubling-down of dead and stupid gags/jokes.

A quick side-note: there is full nudity later on, so this is definitely not for kids. I was honestly disappointed by this, as it was completely unnecessary and something I try to avoid as porn has messed me up enough already.

The world building is slow, but very creative.
The characters are interesting enough I want to see what they do next.
The action is... clunky but alright.
And the plot is slow but gets extremely interesting.

It's just unfortunate that pages have wasted the potential for good character interaction and development moments on one of the most stupid jokes/misunderstandings that could possibly exist:

The MC (main character) was without a job and failed 100 interviews. Then, he gets a cheat in the form of not having a "job" (class designation like merchant or swordsman) in the new world. The story explicitly explains that the MC understands the difference between not having work and not having a "job" (class designation). Yet he gets embarrassed to say he doesn't have a "job" when he knows people are talking about having work, as if he doesn't understand the difference between a class and having work.

So the "jobless" mix-up is an oxymoron. It's not clever, or funny, it's stupid.

So, any sane person would realize writing this makes them look stupid. This story, however, doubles down on it, wasting several pages that could have been spent on what readers wanted to see (romance and character development or plot).



This is objectively bad writing because the content is illogical.



Despite how horrendous the joke was, the idea of making think the MC is a lazy monster is funny... once.

But the author decided to double down on this by having them ruin his own intimate time with Haru... which is half the draw of this manga.

In fact, so many people have walked into his room to stop him from getting physically intimate with the girl he loves that, despite showing they are physically intimate on two prior occasions, you'd think the author didn't know they were already intimate and was trying to write for 5 year olds.

Imagine going to an ice cream shop, after having eaten ice cream there twice, and then being told you're too young to enjoy ice cream at all: it's that frustrating.

And even more logic that doesn't make sense is

So the MC knows she's old enough to know, still treats her like she's too young, and then constantly says "oops I forgot" while still treating her like she's too young. That's not funny, that's being a disrespectful jerk.

So, once again, basic logic is ignored. And even when the author does address it in-story, it comes across as being an afterthought instead of a genuine character flaw of the MC.

Which is too bad because the rest of story, despite being slow to get anywhere, is great. The plot is complicated and interesting, the characters—when they're not being treated like 8 year olds—are likeable, and the world building has some really cool elements.

So far (chapter 41), the stupid has been (mostly) kept away from the plot, and some of the dumb things are being explained (which, though sloppy, is better than most) so I'm looking forward to more.

It's worth taking a look at if you've got the patience to uncover the plot.

... Last updated on April 26th, 2023, 12:09pm