Can't believe I finished this manhwa. The story was so dumb.

First of all, the main girl character was like 13 or 15? Either way she was skinny as a stick and clearly didn't have any muscles so how was she able to hold her own against super muscular pro fighters?

The fight scenes were not realistic AT ALL. To the point of detracting from my enjoyment of the story. They were full of stupid cliches like someone being able to run faster than someone can swing a fist or a sword. Sorry, that's just dumb. You can't dodge a fist by jumping over it, wtf.

The worst thing is, yes the girl has hard bones but that doesn't mean anything when you can just knock her out or better still just choke her out. It's not difficult since she's just a skinny kid and has barely any muscles. Yet LITERALLY NONE of the characters in the story attempted to choke her out despite that being the most obvious solution to her hard bones.

The villains were all 1-dimensional cardboard cutouts. Basically evil rich villains who want to kill the poor because they're snobs or something. It's overcliched. Idk how someone can call this a good story. It's not. It might work as a cartoon for 5 year olds, and even then it'd be B-tier at best.

Characters were stupid. The girl Sanwol was unbelievably stupid and reckless. The other characters were stupid too. Most of the guys were just knuckleheads who seem to be incapable of doing anything other than seeking out fights. The main male character was barely present and had pretty much no agency all throughout the story. He just reacted to events and just coincidentally runs into things as they happen. There were so many of those plot contrivances where the MC suddenly shows up just as a good guy is about to get killed. It's really bad writing.

So overall, the story sucks, the characters are badly written, and there is no theme or morals to speak of other than "evil greedy corporation bad". And the solution? Just beat up the big bad CEO and every societal problem will be solved somehow. It's such a stupid story.

Like suli235 wrote, the manhwa was obviously rushed. It‘s really a shame, because the story could‘ve easily gone on for another 90 chapters. The potential for more epicness was definitely there.
You can tell, the author had planned more things, but apparently it got axed.

Still a good read. The characters are lovely and easy to root for and I really like that the MC is mentally tough but physically struggles a lot, even until the very end. She is a skinny girl after all, and while there are some supernatural powers in the story, physical fitness still plays a big role. And a teenage girl just can‘t fight a big muscular man and expect to wipe the floor with him, even if he is just fodder. In that regard the fights are very realistic and I appreciate that.

I disagree with the „loose ends“ that suli235 mentioned, though. Every storyline was brought to an end (except one fight at the very end, but that one wasn‘t really important and we can guess who won). It was extremely rushed, unfortunately, two strong characters were thrown in at the end, without even mentioning their names, but.... from a pure factual perspective, every secret and open question has been resolved.

But there could‘ve been so much more and the ending could‘ve been really epic, but without proper build-up it all just falls flat.

It really pains me because I liked the characters very much. What could‘ve been.....

Still a 7 for me, because it‘s a good read.

Great manhwa, but the ending was definitely rushed, with more than a few loose ends left, which was a shame because I felt like it could have been wrapped up cleanly with just 5 more chapters. Good story telling before the last few chapters when it began to feel rushed, and loved that there was a strong female lead.

... Last updated on May 17th, 2020, 8:31pm