Typical strong independent female who acts more like a douche bag than an actual human being. The FL is a Marysue. The entire world was created just so the author can showoff how amazing and talented this FL is, and despite her doing nothing more than literally insulting almost everyone she meets, everyone shall fall madly in love with her so called "free independent spirit."

I've seen worst stories, this story feels like it wants to be interesting and fun, but it falls flat because the author is so insistent on telling us what they want to happen instead of letting the characters personalities decide how it happens. A lot of things feel forced to happen because author said so and less because of the actions of the characters.

For example, the FL first helps the ML b.c he is bleeding. His bleeding will never be mentioned again, you won't know where on his body or how he got the wound. He was poisoned but you will never know how. How did his bleeding stop, and how deep was the wound that the FL was able to notice the blood, was it even his blood? The world will never know. In fact there won't even be blood anywhere on his skin or clothes b.c the whole "oh no he is bleeding" bit was just a trigger device the author used to get the FL and ML to meet. Once they meet the bleeding no longer matters and the author completely forgets to address it again, not even after 31 chapters in does any of that get addressed.

... Last updated on February 16th, 2021, 5:50am