If you like controlling, manipulative ahole MCs who think of women as slaves to do whatever they command along with a willing slave to do his bidding because she's "in love" with him, then you'll probably love this oneshot. Otherwise, I'd advise you to go elsewhere. I feel that I was too generous giving this a rating of "3". If I ever read it again (though extremely doubtful), I'd probably lower that to a "1".

But I could have seen Ryouku get a little more perverted with Nami, like maybe in future chapters... Overall, it did not have enough pages for a whole lot of originality, but was still quite enjoyable.

well, this was a very fast story.... it was....aaahh I don't know, foreseeable and not enthralling at all. There was only one moment I thought the story is gonna have a different...§shift of direction" from what I expected. But this was wrong. It ended up and turned out like I expected.

All I could think about after reading this was that it was suuuper fast. @@
Like.. very fast. Very very fast.

Don't even know what happened O__O..
Maybe cuz I'm just a fast reader, but then again, this IS a oneshot.

well if u always wanted the main couple to kiss in a story, and though the story was lacking kiss, then read this fellas cause u like this...