The concept had promise, but the tropes in this (particularly the pompous antagonists) were pushed far enough to be more annoying than funny and made the story less enjoyable. It's short so I finished it, but I can't recommend it and wouldn't read again.

It's nice to see the main characters get along so well while fighting a common enemy. The writing is creative and the characters are wholesome and it's just a nice fluffy read.

This entirely depends on how you feel about Leonarcissist, but him and the other antagonist just wouldn't listen, they were so conceited, full of themselves, absolute morons … that the frustration they brought was never outweighed buy the end result.

And because they never listened whatever they said or the protagonist tried to say didn't really matter, so at least half of the things that were said (or thought) were pretty much pointless.

Also this is a short story, which means it lacks depth or any side characters (let's not even mention their development), so this could never get a high rating and yet ...

I'm not saying it's garbage, Riol was pretty smart after all, but I just couldn't ignore or even find the prince's actions funny (I'm sure some do), they say my ADHD sense of justice is to blame, so I don't recommend this to anyone with it.

This story does not have your typical op ml and a dumb fl. The concept is pretty creative I enjoyed reading it. 100% recommended

... Last updated on August 14th, 2022, 4:41pm

Recc.