The writing is quite poor, the events are not properly explained, they feel rushed and without much sense, to the point were the MC saying a few words is able to revert the situation, so there wasn't much there in the first place. This is done to present the MC as a capable woman, but in fact it's just that the situations are not properly presented. All feels rushed and shallow.
Characters give off the same feeling shallow and insubstantial, there isn't much background nor development, actually, the first chapter is a good example of the whole story, in 8 or so pages the author crams events that could fill 10 chapters, other series already rush this intro and even so take at least 2 to 3 chapters (normal length chapters, this manhua's chapters are extremely short). As a reader I had to fill in all the blanks in the incoherent story to make it fit and make sense, which was no problem since it's a copy paste but it's the perfect example of how lacking and badly written this is. For those with doubts, just read that first chapter, if you liked it you'll probably like this.
Lastly, pace is as said rushed and art is lacking, it's not only ugly but everyone is simply to stiff, the flow from panel to panel is awful.
Given that this is just a copy paste of a story I've read 100 times, it lives and dies by how well the plot is used and how interesting the characters are... this one dies imo.

... Last updated on July 6th, 2022, 10:48pm