- Art: Very very pretty!! It was very neat and the chibis were especially cute, I really liked it!
- Characters: I liked their relationship's development. They suited each other very well and it was overall very fluffy, it was so endearing to see their mutual attraction grow for each other.
- Plot and execution: There was nothing too dramatic going on, but the added backstory for Fukamachi's family was done well, it added to the plot and it made us readers feel for him more, like it added more depth to a character that seemingly looks happy all the time (the typical "there's more to the character than he lets on", but done well). My only complaint would be that after the characters got together, it ended too soon! I wish we could have gotten more scenes of them being all lovey-dovey after becoming a established couple 🙁

I really enjoyed the main story ! The characters facial expressions and their design were good. It was funny, fluffy and the characters were all endearing (especially Fukamachi). My only issue is that the mangaka cut off the story too soon without a satisfying ending, just to go make an unrelated oneshot after that. However the oneshot had no context, it’s like we landed in the middle of what was supposed to be the third chapter of another BL.

Also I was slightly confused about their role (uke/seme). Granted that it’s a shounen-ai, so the focus is absolutely not on this aspect, nevertheless to me it appeared that Fukamachi wanted to be taken by Takeda (ch.1) but Takeda imagined being taken by Fukamachi and it looked like the mangaka followed this idea.
It would have been better in term of dynamic if Takeda the MC was the seme (it’s quite rare and original to follow the seme’ pov) and Fukamachi the persistent uke, chasing relentlessly after his seme. But I guess it’s ambiguous enough for us to decide how we want it to be.

... Last updated on July 21st, 2022, 2:36am