Sorry, dont get me wrong: the art was rather nice and the story was average. However, it was too cruel!!!!! poor Taki, i even cried... i hate his cold stupid father and that coward chef Xl, oh my it was really cruel!!!!! And the supposedly shota story wasnt shota because it wasnt explicit at all, in addition, the boy was represented not as boy but a some supernatural creature with evil powers or so.

neither story nor art are anything special, but at least the art isn't as bad as it is in yogoto na yamashii niwa de. i don't mind that the pairing doesn't work out as most probably expect, because the way the story is built, it makes sense that the other pairing would be stronger. if there's anything to be said for this story it's that at least it has this small surprise in it. if i cared about any of the characters, maybe i'd feel sorry for the kid, but there is nothing here that would make me care.

the other story is shota, which i wish i had known before reading it because i dislike shota (i added it to genre). i truly wish that the sexual bits had been in the other story, then this one would have been very mildly amusing.

This is one poorly constructed manga. It truly has a lot of flaws, from plot devices to story development to characters design; everything's almost all over the place. I get a vague idea of what the mangaka had intended to achieve, but sadly she simply wasn't able to get to her aim. Had she sticked to one thing at a time or had a different approach or just a change in construction of the story, things might have worked out better. Ah but it might be because of the scanslation also. I don't want to be ungrateful or anything but seriously the quality is just too low for any acceptable standards. It certainly bugged me a lot, turning me miserable trying to crack what the hell was actually being said during the conversations or dialogues in the manga. Although this manga is not too terrible, I do wish I had been spared the time reading it.

I have to disagree with poster below, I found the pairing to be goof, although sad for the younger one I feel maybe in a sequal he will get with his friend, as it seems he is in love with Take.

I'm not even sure what to think of this one, even after a re-read. The mangaka failed to show that the main characters actually needed to be together. The pairing felt superficial to me.

... Last updated on November 14th, 2011, 12:19pm

bleh.... at first I didn't like the couple. But *at the end* it's not that bad. The first two chapters were pretty boring. I skipped a lot of pages and dialogue -_- And I hated the last shota chapter. I didn't read it at all.