Muita enrolação e tedio nao gostei

Hmm the art was a letdown, nah it's just me who feels that way. The girl in the first story, Hana, is so strong, after all the pain, she can still put up a mask and act like everything is fine, wao, not many can do that, a kind and considerate person.

The main story was just not suited for a quick, three-chapter telling. The plot tries to be too complex and, as a result, the story feels rushed and broken. One of the sidestories was significantly better than the main one. The first sidestory felt a little stretched as far as the girl's family was concerned, but otherwise was very good. As for the second, it was almost as bad as the main story and for the same reasons.
There was nothing wrong with the hero, except for the fact that he seemed to have no personality. As for the heroine, she was inhumane! Something about her character screamed "fake" but instead of being portrayed as someone who was fake, she was treated as if she was a saint. Both sidestories really show that having more than one character with a personality seems to impossible.
Overall, it's an okay read, but I can't help thinking of how it could be improved when I read it. A few changes and it could have been a good story. This series is a rather forgettable, dime-a-dozen type of read.