Came here expecting something, but received the usual "this oneshot is too short". Well, i know, in most cases these histories are about giving the reader the chance to imagine what the future may hold for the characters, but oh boy, i am lazy, 100% of that at least, so thinking isn't my strong side y'know, so most of the time i read these things i just come out in the other side empty handed, anyway, would not recommend, the semus is kinda lame(if you are going trough that route) and the characters(beside the leading one) are kinda lame, its too short, but has a good idea(in a story writing sense, but it doesn't mean its a good thing to the reader), so i guess go expend your time reading other things(yuri is the only and the better alternative btw!)

I like the art. Especially the way the artist draws eyes. This one is pretty simple. Main character likes sex, wants to have sex. She's into girls though and so it just hasn't happened yet. She sees (Side Note: I put this in spoilers even though this story is so short that it shouldn't matter but whatever.)



So my main complaint here is that this story was just way too rushed, lacked character development, and would have been much better as a story encompassing multiple chapters rather than a single short oneshot story.

It's definitely worth reading though because of the art. Though maybe that's just my personal preference.

... Last updated on February 1st, 2017, 1:55pm

ok, why in the world would you sleep with someone (spoiler) that you just saw sleeping with someone else? this oneshot is strictly about sex and nothing else. doesnt it bug her that she was just touching and sleeping with someone else seconds ago? so disgusting.