Since there isn't really a plot, nor does it pretend that it does, I will judge it based purely on art. As far as the composition goes, this artist really does outdo herself. She is absolutely amazing in capturing the emotions, expressions and the body of the characters.
Not too much going on here, but it's 8 pages, so who cares, right? Cute art, cute story. Nothing brilliant -- I've read better short one-shots -- but the cuteness makes it alright.
It's extremely short, but enjoyable none the less. Great artwork (bonus that the whole thing is done in color too), and a story that, while admittedly a simple one, still manages to get it's message across without feeling like it's been stripped down.
wow that was short, but in color, and it made its point it was good for a really short read... if anyone got 1 good minute read this, and appreciate the work of another.
Guy in love, typical, but he has the courage to confess...what happens next? Go find out.
Weak plot, but it has great art. Wouldn't really recommend this to everyone, but if you don't care about plot, and just want some pretty non-hentai and/or non-overly-ecchi pictures to look at? Read this one.
For a one-shot being in color, it's really awesome. Makes you wish her other works would all be in color too. Definitely shounen material, since all the focus is on the girl. Story's fairly cute albeit simple, but what more can we expect out of 8 pages?
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