this comment covers ch1-4; i am not gonna read any more of this when it becomes scanlated. i'm not rating it low because it's shota, but because it stinks. story 1 has no real reason to it -- why did naoki never try to contact satsuki if he supposedly loved him all along? it's not like anything seems to have stood in the way of their forever-love. this is really just a PWP with a thin excuse for a plot, but i don't like to have my story sense insulted so ineptly. everyone should learn from chitose-sensei how to write PWPs that work; it can be done. satsuki is unbelievably squishy and angelic, naoki is trying to be gloomy and mysterious, but there's not much there. and since i don't care about the characters, the sex is not hot; do anything with me, no not there, shlorp shlorp, thrust, deeper, aah ungh -- *yawn*. the art is completely forgettable as well though it's not butt-ugly at least; however, i find that pomeranian crybaby uke look a real turnoff -- at least naoki is nice to ogle. backgrounds would be a good thing; the art is just so lazy. the second story is worse; shota incest REALLY needs a plot for me to put up with it. the writing is beyond sloppy. "it hurts". two balloons later "tell me if it hurts". no shit, sherlock, he just did. it took two mangaka to come up with this? please. try harder. (who gave this a 10? why? with some stories the rating is honestly debateable, but i can't see a rating of >4 as legit here.)

... Last updated on May 22nd, 2007, 1:05pm

Don't even bother 😔 nonsensical and illogical
--Caelus the trash raccoon

Ack @_@ the boys are beautiful. But anything else sucks

I might be the resident shota lover in the forums, but this manga sucked soooo bad. I just hope you save yourself the trouble and don't download/buy this. There is no plot and just nothing to it...the characters are one dimensional, not likeable, and the shota aspect is unbelievable and unsavory, even for me.