So. The concept actually brilliant, then the execution is okish.
The writting and characters aren't terrible ; they were actually my fav part.
The story progression , that's where it went a bit ooof for me. It is not just that is a bit off beat but it has a strange sense of harmony (maybe that was on purpose) things felt out of the blue which made me feel insane like i had to go back to make sure i didn't forget to read something or maybe i didn't get something ; nope i actually undertood what happened is jut the flow of the writting and certain plot points felt off.

It's been dropped?! Sucks! It's kinda hard finding yaois about multiple personalities. I actually liked this one. For me, I don't find it all that difficult to keep track of the protagonist, and if I do, it's at a point where whether he's Aki (the host) or Ao (the personality) doesn't matter enough that it ruins the story. I hope it's picked up again else I'm reeeeeallly gonna have to learn Japanese.

This story was very confusing at first. But the plot was interesting enough, so I tried again...and
in my opinion, the author did a good job in transfering the confusion, the characters might experience, to the readers.
Story and artwork are nice enough (up to scanlated chapter 3) to give it a try, if you don´t mind WIPs, of course. Perhaps positive remarks will motivate sbd. to pick this up again.


... Last updated on January 13th, 2011, 10:41pm