the plot tends to jump around but i feel that it had a solid plot idea which is normal businessman x ninja businessman, and the risks that come with giving your heart to another person.
ok back to the plot idea, i felt it was like a good book for example harry potter(not story wise but the quality of the idea) but it felt like someone took a gun to the book and put 4 holes in it so you are missing 20% of the book.

...what the hell did I just read?
The story started off okay, but I could tell it would get worse. The rest of the chapters are hard to figure out, the pacing was whack, it's like the plot was abandoned multiple times...

I had a hard time following this story; it seemed cluttered and clunky. Plus, I wasn't compelled enough to spend the effort trying to figure it out. The pacing was off and the characterization was flat.

its a mess, but i think the omake was good, no the best! it meda me laugh so much.. if i knew about omake in the begining i wouldnt read all manga, just omake.

Pleasant but incomplete. This is like a short story with filler. It has potential, but it starts in the middle and never explains the beginning. The stories made sense, but each added more questions.

The whole story in general is very scattered and it was really hard to connect them together. I wish the story can go more deeper and fill in some of the questions so it can be more complete as a whole. I felt really pointless after reading it because it did not make sense at all.

... Last updated on April 19th, 2007, 1:08pm