Heh, a really short one-shot about 2 lovers, though not exactly the shortest one I've come across. There's hardly any insight into the characters' lives or backgrounds, and there's no real story either. This is just like a cut of life between the couple, showing how they deal with it when there's a problem occurred. I don't think this is in any sense bad, just that there's not enough material to comment on. I do like the art though, and judging on that alone I think that I like this.

in which to get a concept across, but this oneshot succeeds in that. alas it's not a particularly interesting story, but just a tiny slice of these two people's lives, which left me ultimately with a lot more questions about their relationship than what i got from the oneshot.

i'm not gonna rate it because i am really not sure how -- it did the job it was meant to do, but it didn't fulfill me, and i'll forget it as soon as i added this comment.