Pros: Gorgeous art; both males are the same build.
Cons: Character designs are typical, and the faces are too similar. The plot is dull. Absolutely nothing special.

Everybody seems to have liked the art. I found it creepy. Too big eyes and mouth in small faces.
I like the topic and I am all for fluff but here the fluff had a forced feeling to it. Like following a formula. I could not get attached to the characters at all.

I can't really say that this manga actually has any 'story' at all, lol. It does have a setting (though even that one's debatable), and there's some 'progression', but seriously, what just happened? Even from the first chapter the development was already very off-putting, in the sense that everything just springs up out of no where at all, and unfortunately that same pace just continued towards the end. The characters are under-developed and at the end of the day their 'love' seems pretty superficial to me. Not that this is the first time I've stumbled on a manga with this issue though, at least I can say that.

I suppose to some readers this could be considered a cute read and all, but I guess I'm just not that 'innocent' anymore to feel the mood. The smut, much like the story itself, is pretty monotonous and not sexy enough to get to me. The art is also nothing spectacular, just not bad. I think I might be a bit mean here, but because I didn't expect this to turn out to be such an ordinary read it's impossible for me not to jot down a few lines of discontentment.

I can't take this thing seriously, the mangaka put zero effort into the plot and dialogue. The art was gorgeous of course, the eyes made them look childish which was a bit off putting but otherwise this was clean af.

I thought it was cute, and as for the people who say it was contrived or shallow, come on, its a fluff manga and does that well! I thought it was sweet, and I thought the characters inexperience was handled well. It really bothers me that alot of yaoi seems to throw consent out the window, so it was nice to see this author change that and keep it sexy.

... Last updated on June 20th, 2014, 9:16pm

Beautiful art.
And at first I was really positive about his one....It seemed very promising to me.
I can say....quite liked the setting.The first 3 chapters were quite good but the next 2 were rather poor. In these two last chapters somehow all problems, which could be possibly indulgently forgive before, escalated and unfortunately also spoiled whole impression:
Solving of any plots are dull (though plots are quite cliché they are still okay).
Characters seem to be quite flat in some moments. (Sometimes it felt that the author couldn't think of any better way out of a situation...so made something what doesn't make sense at all.)
And also too much of stupid and unnecessary talking during sex scene >_<