Frankly speaking this doujinshi felt like such a non-event lol it's just really oddly framed at such a lame moment of these two characters; it's neither romantic nor touching at all, and certainly not nearly as poetic as what the doujinka probably envisioned. The art also isn't that pretty or exceptional. Granted, this fleeting, monotonous storytelling style went out of fashion long ago so comparing it to today's standards might be a little too harsh.