Characters as strong-willed and charismatic as Shizuo and Izaya were reduced to nothing but bland ooc archetypes with no personality whatsoever in a typical BL make-believe setting, and while that's not necessarily the worst thing, this doujinshi didn't offer any goods to compensate for that either. You got no smut, no entertainment, Shizaya themselves weren't even that cute. The sight of them wearing yukata and doing not much else isn't really interesting enough lol.