Basically what the title of my comment said. All the chunks of texts and technical terms regarding the Japanese bureaucracy system dumped at readers at the beginning were a bit much, but once you catch drift of the story and its characters you'll quickly become immersed in this one and be able to find enjoyment in the little details as well as subtle humorous/ heartwarming moments throughout the manga. It's not a bad debut work at all and I'm definitely intrigued by the mangaka's less than conventional style, especially her art and its balance between serious and comical scenes haha. One warning though: this isn't your typical quick and easy bubblegum BL romance manga chockful of in-your-face fanservice and explicit smut, so if stories with a more mature and subtle vibe aren't your thing you should probably skip this one altogether.