-- ART: The Art was great. Sometimes inconsistent, but overall great.
Battle scenes were bad. It's like they tried to make it as intense as an anime and nothing was ever clear. I got to the point where I gave up on trying to figure out what I was seeing and just quickly eyed over the pages reading the dialogs until the battle stoped.
-- Setting: The setting was good. It reminded me a lot of freezing. The characters premisses were also great. They had very interesting and distinctive personalities, specially because they were from different countries and backgrounds, which helped enrih their special traits a lot. But... it only starts off well...
Whats wrong?
- Development: The development sucks. There's no building up to climaxes or any important situations. Setting and Character potential are lost in this mess. It's like when a little kid tries to tell a story but ends up saying every single thing too fast and forgets half the stuff they wanted to say to begin with.
For example, one of the girls would tell the character something important about their lives and I would think "Why are you even telling him that? You barely even know him", and I barely even knew them to begin with, which made me care much much less for whatever the hell they went through in their past.
I mean, in freezing, 40 episodes build enough expectation to make me REALLY pissed off about Satella's family when they bring the shit up.
Here, they condensed 125 episodes worth of story in only 25, it got rushed as hell.
When the side character DID know each other, it was because half the cast were childhood friends. Whaaat? This is the kind of forced situation created to explain whatever the mangaka needs to explain, which is only acceptable in oneshots, since the mangaka has only so many pages to draw interest.
Maybe they tried to do too much and ended up not doing anything? With all the premises thrown in the story, after reading it, I only remember the petty romance dramas.
He got kidnaped, so what?
She's a bastard child, so what?
Parents got divorced, so what?
Sister's attitude and shit broke family up, so what?
Got disowned by parents, so what?
Failed military experiment, so what?
legendary sister retires for mysterious reasons, so what?
Nothing ever got done with any of it.