I actually really enjoyed this. At first I was kind of bored thinking this was just going to be like any other one-shot but the twist was very pleasant. No, it wasn't the best story, but how many one-shots are?

I mean, to phrase it so negatively's too harsh. Sure there was no character development etc etc etc but it's a one-shot written for the purpose of "fun". I had fun reading it. The sex was great. You don't always need a sentimental plot to win you over. What's good about yaoi's that there's lots of variaties to choose from depending on your mood. If you want to read something deep, then look for something else. Otherwise, if you're just looking for something to pass your time then this isn't bad at all. And I see nothing wrong with the art. There are other mangakas out there who's stories are drawn worse. But then again you can't really judge a story on how it's drawn. Sure the art's a contributing factor to how much you'll like the story but still... this one's not "ugly". I've seen more disproportional ones

... Last updated on May 11th, 2011, 5:29pm

The story was horrible. There was no character development, there was no charisma between the characters, and on top of that the art was horrible. The characters faces seem to bend...like pringles or something.... This was so bad I think I'll make a point of avoiding this artist all together in the future. Oh, and FYI, there is NO S&M!!!

It was an excellent 'twist' but ultimately not satisfying because the characters were too under-developed and shallow. It merely -barely- skimmed the surface of the true fascination of the D/s world.

An interesting oneshot, though not particularity memorable. The sequel was more fun.

... Last updated on August 5th, 2009, 6:56pm