it's a bit too soon to say anything about it, but it looks to be shaping up to be on par with uso to kiss and empty heart, minase masara's 1 volume works. i am always glad when she writes longer stories; her oneshots rarely come into their own. the triangle here is more interesting than in most love triangle stories; i'm curious where she'll go with it.
2011-04-13: i finally picked this up again and finished it. and oh boy, did it ever go downhill. she didn't go anywhere interesting with that story; she went straight into familiar yaoiland territory where rapees fall in love with their rapists. and i'm sorry to all y'all friends of non-con, but in this case i am absolutely NOT in favour of that trope. see, there isn't even the slightest excuse this time; there is no "i love you but you've scorned me", or "i love you and we're both drunk", or "i love you but i've held back so long that i can't bear it anymore". no, the rapist rapes our uke because he wants to destroy his own brother's happiness; it is pure malice.
and yeah, i understand the japanese propensity for forgiveness, sacrifice, and singing kumbaya; a society with this many people living in such a small space cannot easily afford permanent discord, and there is something to be said in favour of striving for harmony even when it is most difficult. but it simply doesn't sit right with me in this case. because there is somebody else who's getting badly hurt here, and that's the rapist's brother -- who doesn't deserve the pain in the slightest, and who has already been hurt this way for years. so this is just an enormous misstep for me, and it destroyed any enjoyment i had in the story, no matter how charmingly pitiful minase paints the rapist afterwards. yeah, i do feel sorry for him, but no, i don't think forgiveness should be this quick, and i also don't believe people change their spots this fast and just like that. i might have stomached it if we had gotten another volume of development before the end, but as it stands, yuck, no.