Great action-packed manwa; it has one of the most dynamic starts I've seen in a while, though don't expect anything too intellectual. The story is set fast, the MC is in a rush to get strong as fast as he can, while using some future knowledge. There are some minor plot holes when he uses that knowledge, mostly from objects that are introduced.

Almost all the main cast is shown at the start. Tis means the author planed the plot, so some characters that were well done, like the broker nun, didn't really have a purpose or died in the initial story planning... but at least the author is honest about this and tells the readers what he changed, could or couldn't execute well, and characters he's trying to add or take out.

The weakest point is the romance; it's terribly done, and the start is rushed (she's an ally, and they need each other, but their missions should make them more cautious). Another flaw is that when he tries to portray an aggressive character or attitude, it comes out thuggish.

... Last updated on March 25th, 2024, 4:33pm