The smut itself is nice, great drawing, but maaaan is it rapey. There's a lot of rapey BL but this one is more uncomfortable than usual, because the bottom being forced is often rejecting the sex in a really direct manner. It doesn't feel like the "usual" "says-no-but-actually-wants-it" (at least at the start of the story).

Also it's a sequel and has the default of assuming we already know the characters, so the first episode is confusing as hell. I still don't understand why they had sex the first time (). So I probably need to read the prequel to piece it together. That's a big weakness in my opinion, if you write an independent piece it should re-establish the setting somewhat.