Original doujinshi by Yuririn no Moto (ゆりりんの素)
Oneshot (Complete)






It's short and boring, but if it was longer I think there could actually be a plot and all that. I just don't like one-shots I guess, but I got what I was looking for and the art wasn't terrible, so it gets a 5. I just wish it was longer.
never read much yuri, but i know this is one bland yuri. their relationship seem too forced, the sex is boring, the characters one dimensional, and the art is in need of improvement as the anatomy just plain weird. giving a 5 cos this is a doujinshi, so i cut this mangaka some slack.
So, so gross.
I don't think I'll ever get used to the insistence of the Japanese to juxtapose childishness with sex, but even though this wasn't real loli it was somehow the grossest example of it I've ever read.