The story is so unbelievably trash without reason that anybody could fix it or come up with a better one. They would just need an artist to do the rest of the work.
This could have been peak if literally, anybody else tried to write this plot other than this author.
I have read more than 2350 comics and it's rare for it to be so bad I can't bring myself to read further 0/10. You can look at the pictures without reading. There is no need to interact with a story such as this it only makes the experience worse.
Comics with similar art and plots are getting about 100x more traffic. The numbers speak for themselves how do you mess up the story so badly and why take someone whose writing is so trashy up for something other than amateur writing?
Even in theory, it doesn't make any sense. Who would choose to possibly give up control over your own life, as opposed to just trying to fix it? The MC is just willing to walk on the edge trying to off himself and acting as if it's the only choice, well no you could have done things your way with much better efficiency.
But the MC chose to become the lackey of some organization that brings you 0 benefits and threatens you with the life of yourself and your girl when you could have just used your power to off them instead.
I don't care if they are righteous or you will join them in the future. Whatever happens, I would not give an enemy such as this the time of day and neither would most people.
So what's the audience for this? Somebody whose willing to read this because of it having good art?