Each chapter feels like it probably was an entire book in a novel, because everything happens so fast that nothing ever gets traction. It reads like a checklist for 'things that happened' and nothing of consequence happens in between to make anything feel tangible, or like the MC has any real effect on the outcome. They are the McGuffin, not the protagonists that drives events.

The art is excellent, and everything is adorable, but I cannot really recommend it on that alone.

There are glaring plot holes that make no darn sense. Most egregiously

Art- 7.5/10 It's cute, but doesn't really stand out.
Plot 6/10 - It has a couple of fun ideas, but is largely just entirely inoffensive.
Characterization 3/10 - These are not human beings ,but puppets. Ones to be mocked. The Background characters have more character.
Pacing: 1/10 The problem with moving faster than light, is you're always in darkness

Overall: 4/10 - There were ways for this to of been a great and interesting story. Those ways didn't happen. Skip.

So I read chapter 1 and it seems pretty promising for me.
The circumstance FL was in was so tragic it saddened me. I just wish her happiness and also that crappy house of her so-called parents and sister would fall miserably.