They go from cute confession to a hot sex in a second. Questionable way of courting but I guess it work.

The art is really good and the initial characterisation of the 2 men works well but the flow of the story is pretty much messed up and too rushed at some point and unfortunately it messes up with the caracterisation as well.
It would improve greatly with some minor changes in pace.

Well it's cute. It was fast paced but it's cute

Seme started off pretty cute and sweet then just became way too pushy and aggressive. Didn’t feel any chemistry between the two, and the sex scene was inserted at a weird place and unrealistic. Only saving grace is the pretty art. Maybe this would have worked 10 years ago, but not in current times for sure.

This is a cute short story about two guys who fall in love! One works in a convenience store, and the other is a regular customer. They both like each other, but the worker hides his feelings while the other guy is more flirty.

The art style is cool, and done in black and white like manga, but the format is a webcomic.

The only thing I didn’t like was that it falls into the yaoi trope of romanticizing sexual assault and not really getting consent when the couple does have sex. The sex scene happens pretty quickly, and I wish it would have just not had a sex scene or established them as a couple before that happening. One character basically kisses the other and then starts fingering him, and when he asks if it’s okay, the guy doesn’t really respond with yes or no.