Although Jyun's family forced her to marry Setsuna, she came to love him. Now a married high school girl, Jyun tries her best to be a good wife. However, Setsuna doesn't seem to like her at all!
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It's a one-shot, a pretty bad one-shot, but the point is it's a one-shot. You can't hold the plot up to the same standards of a multi-chapter story.
But the problem is that this story has way too much crammed into too few pages--this idea was almost cute (and somewhat amusing), maybe a 10 chapter story or so would give it some time to shine.
The amount of drama versus the number of pages is ridiculous, and I'm sure this is the reason the story seems so awkward.
Hey, I've seen volumes filled with worse art. I'm sure we all have.
Give this a plot a better chance--with a different mangaka and some chapters, and who knows? 😀
well... im really not a fan of whiny and always at tears heroine...and i also dont like the childhood friends syndrome...the part about the older guy being a bit up there...i also dont like that...
so basically i think this is a bit retarded... i mean the girl she fell for him just because his nice to her at first meeting?? well strangers can give you candy...and then later have bad motives?? just what kind of dumbass will fall for that??
its a good thing that this thing was short...if this thing was a series... i probably wouldve dropped it...as in all the way down...
well i have enjoyed the cliched ending... oh wait... not really... worst one shot out there...
i love how they loved each other. i really didn't like how they misinterpret everything they say to each other. i wish they bonded more, but the ending wouldn't come out this way if it didn't happen. i cried everytime i read this manga. i HIGHLY recommend this oneshot!!
It even had the
run into the street and get hit by bus/car cliche
Anyways, I somehow liked it despite how ridiculous it was. Maybe it's 'cause it was a one-shot? The kisses were hot and the guys aggressive.
This is a really sweet romantic story about love and marriage. I re-read it about 5 times since its so cute. I def would recommend this oneshot to those who just like romantic storys about a man and his high school wife.
Before I read this, I thought this would be a typical sugary shoujo. Even though it is somewhat typical I still enjoyed it. That's actually amazing - a oneshot that I enjoyed.
Typical shoujo oneshots usually end with a confession of love and a kiss or some form of affection. But what got me here was the more serious nature of the oneshot. I mean they're relationship is obviously more than a quick confession. And Setsuna is so sweet.
Finally, a recommended oneshot!