Naruto dj - Goshiki no Niji ga Oriru Toki

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Pairing: Naruto x Sasuke

Rumor has it that the hawk will fly through time when the five-coloured rainbow appears. But time travelling isn't possible, right? Until Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura found a two-layered sealed scroll, containing a secret jutsu, they surely thought the same...

Type

Doujinshi

Related Series

Naruto (Adapted From)

Associated Names

Naruto dj - When a Five Colored Rainbow Appears

Naruto dj - When the Five-Coloured Rainbow Appears

ナルト dj - 五色の虹が降りる時

ナルト dj - 五色の虹が降りる時完全版

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honey-vanilla

Utopia

Latest Release(s)

v.2 c. by honey-vanilla 10 years ago

v.1 c. by honey-vanilla 10 years ago

v.1 c. by Utopia 4 years ago

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Status in Country of Origin

2 Volumes + 1 Omnibus (Complete)

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Average: 8.5 / 10.0 (2 votes)

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Last Updated

February 1st, 2021 6:19pm PST - 4 years ago

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Doujinshi Drama Shounen Ai
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Author(s)

10-RANKAI (emi)

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10-RANKAI (emi)

Year

2009

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3 Month Pos #2318

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6 Month Pos #4803

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Year Pos #5845

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Actual plot with beautiful art and angst

by nausicaa70
4 years ago

Rating: 8.0 / 10.0

Loved this dj ! Very heartfelt. I also really liked some panels

especially the one with sasuke crying while naruto is asleep

I was a bit confused though, so here is the comment of someone named GAHD who made a summary of the whole thing. It cleared things up for me so maybe it will help others as well.

GAHD. Confused • 6 years ago
Here's my take on it.
Current Sasuke decides to get over the past by not thinking about it. He believes that forgetting the past when he was happy would be better than having the pain of thinking about his happy family, their death, and the whole shebang with Itachi. He becomes this dull eyed guy that Naruto and Sakura doesn't like. Naruto believes that Sasuke shouldn't abandon his past. When they see a space-time jutsu made by Minato and Fugaku they try it out of curiousity. Naruto loves Sasuke too much to let him let go of the past so he went to see the past that Sasuke doesn't want to see. He's not supposed to meet anyone just look around. He's an idiot and the Uchiha catches him. Fugaku takes his ID tag. He indirectly proves to Fugaku that he is from the future by using the wind infused rasengan when they walked outside and with that Fugaku lets him enter the forest and there meets Renge. Fugaku talks with Naruto regarding him and Minato etc etc.As the people before me pointed out: Itachi, knowing the darkness of the clan and being able to see all the problems and death that it can cause wants to learn of the past and wants to change it but Fugaku, the guy who helped make the jutsu, knows the problems of time-travel and stops Itachi. Sweet innocent Sasuke is sweet and innocent and a little brat. Which pains Naruto because of his own angsty life. Naruto is therefore torn between helping (which seriously makes him see of how pitiful he is and the people around him) and just going back. The problem about going back is that he needs to erase everyone's memory first. And being the idiot he is he doesn't know shit about such jutsus. Fugaku, knowing that their memories MUST be wiped makes him learn it. He studies it while experiencing shenanigans with the Uchiha family. Obviously I'm not telling the story chronologically but you know the chronology anyway. You read it. Anyway. Other Uchiha learns of a spy being protected by Fugaku from the fight where Naruto proved himself to Fugaku. Making shit hit the fan. They need to know why Fugaku would hide a spy so they kidnap Sasuke when the cute little shit was trying to send a letter across time using Renge (to apologize ti Naruto ugh. Cute little shit). Mikoto, itachi, and Naruto learn about the kidnapping. Mikoto wants Naruto to focus on the jutsu but Naruto's priorities always has Sasuke on top so 'fuck reason I'm saving him'. Renge indirectly shows them where Sasuke is and, I think, as Naruto tries to find Sasuke, Itachi went to his father. Naruto saves Sasuke and Fugaku and Itachi saves them. Naruto has ran out of time and must leave now BUT since he threw all the fucks to the wind to save sasuke he doesn't know how to cast the jutsu yet. Fugaku promises that the future won't change and casts the memory erasing jutsu himself. Itachi, loving his brother waaaaay too much and believing in Minato's words that a hawk can fly through time urges Renge (still with the letter Sasuke was trying to send) to fly out of Fugaku's jutsu's perimeter so he won't forget Naruto. Naruto gets back in time and Sasuke and Sakura learns about what he did. Sasuke is angry because he doesn't want to remember and doesn't want anyome to know his past. I believe it ties up well with his canon idea of happiness being a weakness. So he wants to kill Naruto for intruding on his private past or something. Naruto still can't get over his iwn sadness and the feeling of not being able to do anything. He remembers his envy of Sasuke's happy family. Kakashi learns about it and remembers Minato's mission for him. He tries to convince Naruto that what he saw wasn't the past but some just some memories and that it would be better to forget. That past (which according to him are just memories) did not and would not affect the present. I believe Kakashi wants him to forget too because he can see the pain that Naruto is going through. Naruto is skeptical but goes along with it. Kakashi burns the jutsu scroll. Naruto would forget everything after he has slep but before he sleeps he reveals to Sasuke all his regrets regarding what happened and tells him he doesn't want to forget.he talks about the letter. Sasuke sees how important this is to Naruto gives him his own letter and it's heart wrenchingly fuck-the-heart-I-didn't-even-know-I-had full of feels. Naruto sleeps crying on Sasuke. By the next morning he had forgotten most of it. Sasuke, Sakura, and Kakashi lies to him regarding what he did. He knows they were lying so he follows his only lead and gut feeling and wants to meet Renge (who he remembers they talked about the day before). Sasuke scoffs at him cause Renge doesn't approach random people (he barely listens to Sasuke :P) They go anyway. Renge, having been abke to exit Fugaku's memory erasing jutsu remembers Naruto and attacks him in the fucking cute way he does. They both see the ID tag and Sasuke realizes that Naruto trulu did go to the past (not just through his memories) and knows that Fugaku remembers but didn't change the future. He knows Fugaku could be the only one who put the tag there. Seeing the tag, remembering Naruto's words the night before (you know about wanting to know Sasuke and all the love oozing from the dobe) Sasuke finally accepts that the past is a part of him and asks Naruto if he wants to listen to the stories and boom end of story and end of this too long comment. Gahd. This doujin is complex. And i didn't even talk about why Minato and Fugaku made the jutsu!!!

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